- Discussion of adverts is brief - to personal - expand and link to other peoples writing
- link quotes and ideas to back up what your saying
- take the theories and apply them to the adverts
- 2nd and 3rd paragraphs are good - get this standard with the other two theorists
- 55-56% at the moment - can be a first but need to apply the theories to the adverts
- need 10 sources
- 4 of which need to be quoted from
- write more on the adverts - quantity
- apply theories - relativity
Tuesday 29 March 2011
CTS Essay - Formative Feedback.
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